Rough Cut evaluation

• Good cinematography
• Good Editing
• Lighting was good at the beginning
• Music fitted the conventions
• Titles were quite basic and hard to read against the backdrop & foliage, could be improved.
• Character conventions were good (Protagonist had a problem) 
• you could use a sound effect when the protagonist gets hit with the stick.
• Had an antagonist (follows the conventions)
• Costumes were good but antagonist could have looked more threatening.
• Good Location